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The novel barely focuses on the MC after the 2nd or 3rd arc. Some chapters have several POVs of bystanders who repeat things which have already been told through the MC.You could skip entire chapters and miss nothing because even tho the MC needs to die or kill someone the author likes to stall for dozens chapters. If the MC needs to kill some dude the author explains what evil he has done then changes POV to the victim and then we get their sob story then the POV changes to some irrelevant character like the emperor who does nothing for the overall plot or a storyteller who also does nothing or some other evil side character. After all that the MC fights and doesn't die. That's fckn right. The MC stays alive for another dozens of chapters for more dialogue and then he dies.The MC's system is also deeply flawed. When he dies he grows older and the years he aged are spent improving his strength and skills. However all his skills are incomplete so after a while his skills reach the limit. Since he cultivates his body getting older makes him weaker after a certain age. He learns a technique to become stronger even tho his body ages later on and of course the technique is also incomplete.I could go on and on but the tl;dr is: the concept is good but the execution is very bad.0.5/5 don't even touch it