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Premise begins fine, but once he escapes it turns to shit. MC has no real indication of the trauma he endures, especially mentally. He also acts like a typical isekai MC with his personality, which again doesnt make much sense due to the trauma. I doubt any of the editors or translators can read/write/speak english fluently, as a large portion of the sentences are written awkwardly, and some even in broken english. On the author's part there is also sudden tense and POV changes, as well as either boringly long explanations about simple things, or little to no explanation about important things. Overall, the story itself isnt all that good, but could be a lot better with a proper translator and editor.
