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It's an average novel but still didn't convince me.The novel takes itself seriously but the events are straight from a Romcom, so they clash. The chapters are very short so the author wanted to go right at the heart of the drama (MC and the heroines), which to be fair is very interesting, but that's just ignoring the blatant excuse that is the Witch's existence. Why did she appear? How did the MC go back to the past with her? How comes she doesn't remember anything? What's the extent of her powers?Another gripe I have with the novel is how the MC complains that his life's been a living Hell after the appearence of the Witch. But was it? Due to drastic climate changes, food shortages and starvation were commonplace, yet the MC (the 'culprit') was not only spared but fed by God knows how long before ordered to deal with the Witch. Afterwards he was 'tormented' by his party memebers yet it came across more like having to deal with a bunch of tsundere girls than being physically and mentally tortued for years (granted, it's not like the author put much effort to develop their prior relationships). Which just begs the question of what did they see on him?Now it seems we're full on MC will somehow recruit all the powerful people in the nation and do whatever because the Big Bad has amnesia so there's no impending doom, no regret for his poor life decisions to change or anything.