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It's directionless so while well written, you can get bored very quickly.That can* be a good thing, allowing changes in pacing or new interests/areas to explore. Here it doesn't work really well. He is levels very hard then stops. Then it's a gag novel. Then it's a fighting arc.These broad changes and lapses in personality make it difficult to lock onto the MC and the story. Not horrible but I don't have the connection needed to read through a part I don't like.
