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This was a great novel, and is a must read. However, it felt unfinished. A new world was expanded upon for the afterwards story, but they were left too open ended where the chapter plot didn't finish. I feel that the Sci fi additions also ended up bogging the story a bit, it felt too out of sync to me personally. Regardless, the detriment are short. It is a short story so it doesn't matter in the grand scheme. The general plot was written well and that was all that matters. A short comedic read.I also feel that the story was dropped and in infinite hiatus, the extra stories are more of a second story extension, and the last extra chapter (3 so c10) got left on a open ended part that would've got continued to the other chapter but there's none