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木苏里 has written some decent novels, this isn't one of them.You can clearly see that it's an older work, it reads like a very bad fanfiction written by someone who is 14 - at best.All the T-T and other emoji alone make it unreadable, it's so jarring to see something that belongs in a chat in a novel, sometimes even several in a single chapter.There's nothing to say about characterization, the humor or anything else, it has the quality of some random tumblr fic or roleplay, I can imagine that 木苏里 is probably ashamed of this.I can only recommend reading her more recent works and leaving this one in the past, although she's still not perfect, she made noticeable progress over the years and wrote some solid stuff.
