- #1
Started off well, went bad quickly.The MC, as the story progresses becomes more and more dumb.It was all fun in the beginning, but in the future chapters MC becomes so s*upid that you begin yo think "is he pretending or smth?" the misunderstandings grow more and more ridiculous too, not in the sense that they get more fun, but in the sense that the wide margin of suspension of disbelief you give them in the beginning doesn't hold them on anymore. The whole story becomes just something the author obviously forces into happening, with a bunch off super buffoons just being there and be amazed at the MC who only keeps being immature to the extreme.But I'll be fair, the novel is at least not worse than average, its just that it started off well and fell into a slump, making the story look worse than it actually is with the contrast.