- #1
So much potential in this story; a big variety of characters that have unique personalities and interesting conflicts that create tension within the story. Unfortunately, the whole premise of the MC being weak and getting bailed out by luck/his op friends doesn’t quite land, mainly because the MC has room temperature IQ. I kind of get what the author is going for, an absurdist plot that is more satirical and humorous than serious, but the author doesn’t quite do it right and you end up more enraged at the MC rather than laughing at him.
