A Sweet Girl Won’t Be Fooled By The Villainess Chapter v420 Discussion

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The story is ok. Not bad, and I don't hate reading it and I do like the silliness of the MC and the yandere's relationship a lot.

Not super sold on how long it's taking to progress the relationship, though. Like, the MC is a reincarnate and not a 5 year old, so I'm a bit mystified on how it doesn't look like they will be moving on from the "We're just friends!" phase anytime soon.

Also, Every time the MC gets in danger I wonder why the story forgot about the magical sword artifact thing that was given to her relatively early on. Other than it accidentally scaring a wild animal once its never been used despite all the trouble the MC has been caught up in and that kind of bugs me ngl.

I'm also wondering how the system the MC got was ever supposed to actually help defeat the demon lord. I know that it's tasks and rewards have been somewhat tailored to helping the mc's relationship grow but like..... the system is kind of useless? It offers minor rewards for its tasks that don't do much, has an unreliable threat detection system and cannot talk about the main plot. It's most often used for random trivia about random stuff. If the original goal was to raise a hero to kill the demon lord, I'm not really sure how it was supposed to happen even if the demon lord wasn't super ultra plus OP.

Those are things that are making me lower my overall score, but I'm still giving it a 3/5. Not the best thing I've ever read, but not bad enough to make me want to drop it and I'm fine with continuing to read and don't think I will regret it later.
 
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