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I would say was just created to get the story seen in other search areas, Because even thou some details at the start about the MC once being a guy, just doesn't go with how she acts. Should have just started the story off as a girl whose YURI before the transmigration.
[collapse]Some of the story design is ok, but the flaws with the progression & character designs (specially the system) at the beginning make it tough to want to go further. I'll go more and see if the beginning was just a bad start, but I'll keep what I said so far & add on later if it got better because the author was able to grow in their writing design.I'm up to chapter 75 now Spoiler& it did get some what better on the story progression, but still has issues with bringing up & wasting time on stuff we have already told countless times, which drags out chapters.
She was defiantly a girl in her past life, there is no way around her character being a girl personality.
The system is a joke addition to the story, so much wasted time on it.
[collapse]End of first volume.SpoilerSystem kept being silent when FL was around because it feared being detected, but yet at the end talked to MC right beside FL, showing it's design is garbage, not to mention it lies to the MC
MC finally sees FL is a demon and accepts it without being afraid. Now the FL discloses her knowledge that she knows the world have been restarted lots of times & has figured a way to keep the knowledge. But that triggers a world law conflict that startes to kill the MC & FL does a thing to save her.
Start of volume 2 the world law wipes the MC memories of what she heard, but for some reason it wipes here memories back to when she was being burned at the stake, which I guess is the authors idea to make her forget that FL was a demon & make her start all over again, instead of wiping it right when she fell unconscious after being saved. Plus the system lies to her again & doesn't tell her the truth of what happened, but yet gives her credit for completing the quest. But then gives a quest to be kissed by the FL, yet she was kissed after the confession, which should have meant that it should have been completed also.
Then as of now there are holes in the MC design, she remembers to tell the FL the 2 who caused her to be caught & hurt her, but yet she does not point out the injured girl who helped her & ask where was she now.
SO it is still all over the place on rehashed content & design flaws.
[collapse]Vol2 Chapter 35SpoilerYa, I think there is a story in there, but I'm done going further. The author is still too repetitive with repeating details & creating a loop is the dialogue as if an AI was writing it & stating the same thing in a different form over & over.
The characters are not developing & just repeating their flaws that ruin the story at times. At times it's almost like the author is mangling their design to be able to adjust to changes in the story design. It just creates more flaws. Like the MC was kidnapped by a church leader & followers to be burned at the stake. But yet she doesn't try to force not being sent to work at the church. Then later she states that she thought the church was a safe place!!!! Really! How can she not forget nearly dying from what the church was doing behind the scenes? She still never found out about the girl that helped her. Then when FL says she can get her out of it, MC was so relived, yet before going, the MC thought about asking her to prevent going, but doesn't.
The system is suppose to be assisting her, but yet it lies to her & decides to not tell her things she should know. Why even write in the system if it is doing nothing but creating wasted time for us to see MC & it argue & waste talk on nothing that moves the story. Basically most of the time all we hear is the system talking to itself, but since it does nothing, it is just wasted time reading.[collapse] Well, that was my rantings about this story. It might be ok for everyone, there is a story in there, but it's not for me, just too many flaws that stick out.