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Pros:*Finally, an MC who isn't a celebrity, but her sister is*She fights when she needs to*Well translatedCons:*Too much bad things happening to her. Chapters 1-50-ish was just her getting hospitalized*She was forced to marry ML by ML, and I expected her to be mad about it like a normal person would, but she just accepts it! When she wasn't even sure of her feelings yet! She's supposed to be smart! And then she finds out he's been lying to her all along and forgives him too fast anyway. Despiter her constantly calling her mother an idiot for being gullible. The apple didn't fall too far from the tree, I see.*Villains are f*cking s*upid. Like, do they have no other motivation than circle around MC and make her life a living hell? Have a life dude. I know this is a novel, but half the fun of stories are the villains, if you make then too s*upid, then the MCs are not too smart either.*Too many red warning signs. MLs obsession constantly justified and was described as 'warm' by FL, when he is in fact stalker-ish. His only difference with the first villain was that he's rich and handsome and not violent to her (but he is to others) *The author keeps rambling on and on about things the readers already knew. Spoon-feeds readers rather then 'showing' the character's personality and then character acts the exact opposite of his/her supposed personality. I hate this type of writing the most.*ML is MARY SUE!!!And he's cold but somehow his eyes are warm when he looks at her? Make up your mind author!!! He's basically Superman who can't fly and his bodyguards are the justice league. *The side characters are sooo boring, and childish