- #1
I've never skipped so much chapters from the novels I've read except for this one..First, the MC lacks substance. He's usually a yes-man who always get thrown around for the other party's gains but there are times he's shown as smart? How s*upid is that? Imagine having his widowed older sister-in-law to be a mistress just because he liked s*x with her and trying to hide it on the legal wives? Then, having fun out with his females students while his wives are pregnant. Yeah, right, it's work as a teacher as he assumed and he didn't know or even care about how other people thinks about that so he ended up having 3 additional wives. I don't even know what kind of moral compass does the MC is supposed to have..Second, the world building. Too general. Nothing special. It seems japanese authors just tend to just put modern cities as lost ancient civilization. Magic isn't explained too deeply, it's just like how magic in other novels work.Third, how the dialogues is written. I can't even describe how it is.Reading this story makes me always want to sigh.The author is too much dependent on the plot armor that it gets too much boring. I don't hate fan service but its too much. There's only little to none of characters development and the author keeps on adding girls on the harem for whatever reason and ending up the first ones almost in the background.It seemed to me that the author is just a teenager putting all the fantasies into the story incoherently.