- #1
The story starts out with a cliché rural transmigration plot, with heavy family drama and making a life amidst adversity. Though a small amount of unrealistic borderline fantasy elements were mixed in, it focused on relationship cultivation and faces slapping.
Unfortunately the prevalent small fantasy elements evolves into a heavy dose of suspension of belief - sci-fi. The story mid-way takes on a scientisfic researcher mary sue route. The ML becomes background, with his career and advance in general just brushed past. He becomes a convience, a plot device. The story becomes focused entirely on the FL's hidden infamy of excellence and advancment. It also becomes heavy handed with patriotism and mild xenophobia.
Side characters are unexplored and never given closure. Half way thought up character exploration and motivation. Though I have to admit the manner the story dealt with the clash with the reborn person and her ending was very satisfying to me. Too many characters introduced and just too what the hell. Also what happened to the cute animal friend or literally most of the cast from first half of the story? Am I missing chapters? - Kind of a feel.
Not up to my alley but a recommended fun read, especially the first half of the story.
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