1970s Gangster Couple Chapter Completed Discussion

  • Thread starter Blakcherry
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4.0 well deserved for me, the idea is actually nice but the execution and pacing a bit bad, the romance is typically silly sweet op couple, I feel them a bit 2d bcs they really quick to fall in love to each other idk but kinda not so logical especially for MC (she from advanced era, she said she is beautiful back there, I mean if u beautiful and genius it already a charm, so why there's nobody like her there? The Excuse bcs she always in laboratory, but she doing experiment also with people right? Well, that's minor setting, and their romance far to smooth sailing bcs ML pamper MC all the time :) idk u can just say they love each other bcs they want to cling 24/7) , there's a bit of lack of common sense (but still grip basic the logic), it such a shame we don't see more of MC ML life after using time jump
 
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