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I tried to bare with it and finish this story, but couldn't. The writing is just bad and it's clear the author didn't put much thought into it.The MC has no personality and the plot is flimsy. I honestly don't understand how the ML grew obsessed with him, since all he has are his pretty looks and low IQ. The MC has a third chance at life after his second life failed. Why did it fail? He doesn't know, and is confused because he stayed in-character and did everything correct, following the original plot perfectly. So he died, was sent back and what does he decide to do? The exact same thing. He tries to follow the plot perfectly thinking it will work this time. It's incredibly frustrating and makes the MC look s*upid. The system is here too but completely useless. It barely has any lines and all it does is confuse the MC because the thing doesn't know if the MLs kept their memories or not. How does that make sense? What's the point of the system if it doesn't even know what's happening either? Such lazy writing.The plot is just bland and boring. You'd think the author would play with the idea that the MC doesn't have to stay in-character anymore and can finally show his real self to everyone, but nah. It's not like he should be scared of acting OOC and dying since he's already been through the plot once and died anyway. So what you have is a MC who acts like a villain because he's s*upid, and MLs who are suddenly all in love with him because they realized (in their past life) that the boy was actually a softy inside all along, that he was faking it. It makes no sense since the MC literally acted perfectly in-character in the past life (there's no case of unreliable narrator here either), so they shouldn't have been able to detect anything. It seems the author just wanted a story about MLs having a second chance at wooing the MC after they realize their feelings too late, but didn't know what to do with the MC, but that's as far as it goes... the author didn't think about all the plotholes that would form because of how flimsy the idea is. So you're reading this mess thinking "they're all fcking s*upid" and roll your eyes at the actions of everyone.I quickly grew tired of the MC going "I'm angry this time!! I won't allow this to happen, mmph" but then he folds in 2 seconds and act like a wet noodle, allowing everyone to do what they please, despite the MC having more power than them. It's tiring and ridiculous.All in all, the author simply doesn't have enough skills or brains to make a good story. It feels very amateur-ish and is a drag to read.