Surviving in a Romance Fantasy Novel Chapter 30 Discussion

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ffffffffffffkk uuuuuuuuuuuuyu.

I am so frustrated I could commit su*cide. What the heck was author thinking when he wrote the black princess arc.

The Start of novel felt somewhat generic but was enjoyable. When the first princess was introduced it somewhat deviated from the norm. The author put great thought into how every character and their interaction should be and how to progress the story without much unnecessary complications. But then both he and MC went full on brain dead after just 20 chapters.

Spoiler

So when black princess see our MC. She escapes from him because he is showing killing intent, why the heck was he showing killing intent? The princess had a special power to read people, why couldn't she discern MC's intentions? All that chasing around was top tier s*upid plot.

then MC decided to fight the other soldiers so he can take away the princess and she can fulfill her wish to say goodbye. She has been running away for a month and still hadn't cleared her regret. Why the heck was running away her first decision to say goodbye to people. And why would none of them thought to explain the situation to commander.

MC says he completely thought out his brain dead decision, but why was everyone taking the matter of fkng crown princess running away so lightly. Everybody acts like it's no big deal. And why the fk would he think that the punishment for running away with the to be wife of future emperor while fighting a military commander will result in just light punishment? Weren't these type of crimes results in family eradication.

then plot armor after plot armor to show he was right in his thinking and s*upidest development to establish the worst developed character and feelings kept pouring out of author a**.

damn u author. Everyone who thinks there is nothing wrong with this plot should see a doctor.

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