Surviving in a Romance Fantasy Novel Chapter 60 Discussion

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It's an interesting read. I really enjoyed the storyline behind how the MC got close to each of the four heroines. The setting is also unique. Note that most of the romance is suppressed. The heroines are engaged to the crown prince and thus any outside relationship is forbidden. The forbidden part is important because the MC would certainly die if he was caught in a scandal. After each of the heroine's individual arcs, there is noticeable less mention of each of them. I wish the author included more interactions and perhaps adventures to build the relationship between the MC and the heroines. In general, it is lacking. The heroines lack depth since the author does not fully develop them after their individual acts. Furthermore, the MC continues to distance himself from them because, again, his life is endangered.
 
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