The Villainess Captured The Grand Duke Chapter 4 Discussion

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This is my initial review so far since the chs are few. I personally think that the pacing is fast and the narrative was kind of dissonant and awkward — like the author cannot decide which timeline to introduce first so instead, she cut off the current narrative just to introduce the typical isekaid fML backstory.

The fML so far is vivacious, a die-hard fan of ml, and immature (imo). FML is young so I feel she tends to do things whatever her feelings tells her to do and I don't expect her that much to THINK things thoroughly, which leaves a room for her growth in the future chs (cross-fringers). While the ML is almost like a living doll because of his cold expressionless face and non-existent emotions, but there's actually a reason why his condition is like that.

All in all, it's okay-ish and seems promising since the ML hadn't done anything dislikeable.
 
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