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Edit 2nd. Back again after 2 years, still shit. The same problem still looming, I don't think I can get along with the story, it's a total waste of a good concept, worse than the simply bad one.Edit 1st. This Marie character, just wtf is this?? inconvenient character just shat itself out of author's ass, yeah just squeeze plot material generating nonsense, this undying (I predicted) character will serve as an annoyance for another 200 chapters. Yeah, that'll secure some time while you write story about lusting over cola on some randomly generated planet. I hate this type of character, because author can later just vomited it out, out of convenience. Add with the MC, who for some reason dislike, refuse, or fear something yet out of author's convenience. This guy once jumps into the biggest threat out there but went 180 degree when meet with allegedly creepy people.Original review, Plain. To be honest, the only rewarding moment in this story is when he got gold medal award and platinum rank, other than that? none. It's that type of story where neither the author nor you understand the MC. Here's what I understand about MC after reading this story: -He's obsessed with cola, reason? don't know -He don't like Serena, reason? don't know -He don't want to use magic, reason? empire.. boo boo..?? afraid? don't know Author's being too obvious, stretching the story in the lamest way. Most of the story consist of doing mundane stuff in seemingly a lot of places, but don't get me wrong, it's still lame. Random place#13 is place where you.. idk, process meat. You want to know interesting stuff about future (Squidward squat) meat processing facility? ... Well, we don't have any interesting stuff, but we're gonna write an entire chapter about Random place#13 anyway LMAO.
