- #1
1.: Why, after many years, ML have to do a 1% chance of success surgery to walk again for FL???? They are living a beautiful love history, saying that they are going to get married, never separate, that she will show her mother that she can still be with a disabled person and that they have a future together, he is happy that someone loves him and accepts him as he is. She was helping him to overcome his insecurities, BUT [!!!!!] she just have a dream about what happened in the past life, so he have to do a surgery now to walk again, even if they have to break up. Everything that happened after this, is just a big mess, that ruined everything.
2.: The FL mother is too inconsistent, she is able to contradict herself in less than a chapter, a conversation, a sentence.
3.: FL saying that she can predict the future for her mother, and her mother was just "ok", she doing a BIG sh!t with ML and justifying that she can predict the future and because of that, years ago, she had to leave him while saying things painful for him. Is she an !diot?? She didn't live that long in the other life, she couldn't prove what could happen, besides that she changed many things in this life.
4.:FL was offered to marry ML to be with him in another country, there was the opportunity for her to accompany him during surgery and recovery, she could have a long distance relationship, she could have done the boring story of fake break up, BUT NOOO, she felt that she really needed to break up with him, because that's the only way it would work, since she didn't want that herself interfere in any way with the 1% chance of success... And after saying that in the other life he didn't have to worry about visiting her, in this life she couldn't let it happen either, so the ending was essential, BUT......................??????? 3 years later, the ML also says that he never heard from her, soon after, he says that he was always following her from afar, the doctor himself said how he kept going and coming back to China during these years. SO WHY DID THE AUTHOR WROTE ALL THIS USELESS BUTTERFLY EFFECT THING???? WHY THEY NEEDED TO BREAK UP??????????????????????????? THIS JUST SHOW HOW ALL THIS SUFFERING WAS FOR NOTHING, FL JUST DID A D|U|MB THING WHEN THEY COULD LIVED THEIR ROMANCE AND DON'T PASS SO MUCH PAIN. THESE TWO WERE NOT SUPPOSED TO BE SUPER MATURE AND SMART?????????????????????
5.: FL said she would do everything different in this life and show how much she loves ML, but in a super important moment she wanted everything to happen the same as in the past instead of avoiding all the unnecessary suffering that the two would go through. And then one day, years after a painful separation on her part, she sees the ML and he was walking, so what does she do? She decides to chase him, she just talked nonsense and had no clear justification as to why she did so much sh!t -because there isn't-, but after so much bullsh!t she's done, she wants him back, at one point she says she understands he must hate her, then she doesn't care and chases him.
[collapse]Another thing: I think the author didn't know how to develop the antagonistic characters properly, for example, the girl her husband liked, the other two girls who liked him, the grandmother and the illegitimate daughter. I felt that these characters were underexposed during the story, maybe because it was only 91 chapters, it was difficult to develop so many evil characters.There are many other ridiculous things that happen in the story, at first I managed to overlook, but there comes a point where it becomes difficult to accept. FL was supposed to be a mature person who would know how to handle the situation well, but at a certain point she embarked headlong on the old separation plot with tears and all, and it could have been so different. honestly, this story had the potential to be better, or maybe I was expecting too much. I don't have much to say about the translation, it was an MTL translation, some parts were hard to understand. Some chapters I read directly from the Chinese site with machine translation because it was the same thing, no matter where you read. What I liked most about the novel was the cover. Really beautiful, I don't know if it's an image taken from the internet or if it was made for this novel, it fits well with the place where the story is set.