Dream Life Chapter 520 Discussion

I enjoy the novel, but its not good, I am very disappointed since it had a lot of potential, that's why I am a bit sad since I could see this one being really really great.

First the premise and world building started good, but it gets tedious with all the Brewery stuff, I get that MC was an engineer in his past life and he could make some improvements in his new world but they focus to much on this part and really brings not much to the "main plot". The politics and education where ok but they over did it with the brewery stuff.

I really loved the main heroine, and I am always a sucker for a romance story, but the harem was really unnecessary and was beyond forced and it was only a convenient way of adding some fighting power for MC that was not really needed, it could have been handled in other ways with same result and I would not have had such a bad feeling at the end.

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I have nothing against harems when are handled correctly like World finest assassin, but this harem was dumb, main heroine permits him having more women since she will out live him and cant have children, ok that's an ok reason, but him adding an old tiger lady out of the blue makes no sense why the main heroine would permit and encourage it, since she will also not be able to give him children and she will die first than him, makes no sense, the childhood friends while qualify in the baby making department, its just disgusting, he supposedly see them like daughters and then he just decided to randomly add them as brides ok they were adults by then have no problem but there is no romantic development afterwards other than some forced kisses and hugs we don't see any development, they are just plain extras that do their thing while fighting and in the background they barely interact with MC, it only distract from main heroine to shine, and also we don't even get to see if he had kids or not really dumb seems like Author had no clue how to handle the harem and we got nothing good out of it.

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Magic and fighting system seems to be very awkward and really would have been better not to have such thing, it was either overkill or do nothing, could have been handled way better.

Ending is beyond rushed abrupt and terrible after all the world building, it should have taken at least some more chapter to do a proper ending Author seems to not have had more time to wrap it up I guess otherwise I don't understand....

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When he confesses to his family that he is from another world and there was no negative reaction and they just accept it non clamantly right three I should have stop reading since its a given character development is going to be bad.

I feel like most of the plot was dedicated to him being the god of alcohol and there was no real main plot, takes ages for him to find the child he is supposed to guide, then after it was found it literally does nothing for more than 1 year and takes many chapters till something happens (there was never real guiding from him) and then suddenly he is not supposed to help that child because the gods say so, then a big fight happens that kills almost all the people he cares for including all his harem, he throws a tantrum with the gods it works and everyone comes back to life :/ I could not believe it, then there is no development from there, next thing we get after the big and deadly fight is that he is dying on his bed from old age and main heroine was the only one there before he dies like wtf, we don't know what happens to the cast, did he had children? did he mourned the death of the other harem extras? probably he outlived the tiger lady but what about the other childhood friends at least Sharon had also magic ability so she should have lived long enough but we get nothing the harem was handled terrible if the author already committed to have an harem at least don't do this kind of crap to try and redeem that the most import one was the main heroine, then when you think it cant get worst, we get teleported back to japan and MC picks up from where it left at the age of 45, gets a ring on the door and somehow main heroine is there the end I almost lost it on how bad it was handled... suddenly I had flashback when I was a kid and finish Mario bros 2 for the NES that ending was equally terrible

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