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i like this story a ton. I've craved it for years. However, the overall plot is weak to me because Spoiler
it's a story where all the major emotional points happen before the plot due to amnesia.
[collapse] It's a very casual engineering magic story. There are things that I would do differently, such as a harder magic system with more interesting rules and a magic that isn't regular tools but magic, but this is still a good read and I'm glad I read it even though I hate this type of ending. The vibe is good. It's very funny, right. I wish there were more stories like this.