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Great premise but mediocre excution. MC is your basic always kind to your surrounding (apply to everything, even if someone commit the most heinous crime, MC will forgive and forget) and collecting harem while not noticing anything. (Anti hero tag is straight up lies) Author really like abusing and repeating tropes over and over again while stalling the plot as hard as possible. Most of the story arcs is structure similar to each other with little to no change. It's always start with MC + hero party planned to go into the same place, MC and hero party might help each other against common enemy, MC and rival kun always duel when meet face to face, repeat.MC have zero progression in personality department. You think that after having contact, f*cking the most beautiful goddess and her clone daily + some side chicks, he might have develop some kind of confident or mature a little but nope. MC still flustered like a virg*n everytime he see a little bit of skin exposure and have a boner every time he see a little b**bs sway. Also MC have MONSTER DONG so everytime he have a boner he must hide it by doing something weird and the plot got push to the side, he never try to find a way to overcome this "weakness" for some reason. Even rival kun have more progression than the bloody MC. At first rival kun is annoying and shallow, but after getting his ass kick so much by MC he start developing his skill and even teaching MC where he is lacking.World building is intriguing but some times author go a little bit overboard on useless exposition. Plot progression is really bad cause author keep forcing the plot moving forward by cutting scenes or character straight up refusing to explain and just let the misunderstandings pile up. Author play heavily on misunderstanding trope, most of the plot can be solve by simply talking but author either gloss it over or just straight up cut the dialogue and move on to the next scene. Characters relationship is mostly tell don't show but maybe that just my subjective opinion, since most of the characters interaction got push into the background and you just assume characters is friend with each other cause author said so.Shounen tag is pretty cursed, if you see that tag and still want to read the novel then my advice is to reading while turning off your brain. Cause the moment you try to apply normal logic into a shounen novel then you already lose.
