- #1
It's a story with great potential but the author likes to drag things around and keeps stacking up misunderstanding upon misunderstanding. MC feels like a side character, and he keeps focusing on the Hero's team. I feel like the setup should be done by now, and it's time to begin the character development to explore Kuroki. Right now he lacks a goal after making his love doll, Kuna. MC's childhood friend also deserves her character development and redemption arc. That's all I have to say.