I Found a Hole in my Yard. It Might Be a Dungeon, but That’s Now my Garbage Dump Chapter -- Discussion

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This work showcased the author's creativity, creating a mystery novel with only a the main character and the sudden appearance of the hole in his backyard.

It is also well written, the way it narrates the story was relaxed or easygoing at first but then the story picked up its pace and started to be more mysterious which made me more interested in it. It is great that the author challenged himself to make his work more interesting and unique.

The downside is that the story has one big plot hole and it's in his backyard, growing and demanding sustenance.
 
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