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example of my frustration : The MC fells ill, she was wet due to rain and the ML suddenly had a health crisis so she stay near him, ok you're stressed for him but you can't even dry your hair for several hours ? Then there was only one quilt, she used it for ML so she slept with nothing in the cold, ok it's in the culture that even sick woman don't stay too near a man BUT the day after she was so sick that she couldn't do nothing, the ML sees her sick and wanted to take her in the quilt to warm her but he hesitated because she was not really his wife and fear that she hates him, ok but when you feel that she became more and more cold and really might become even more sick and die you continued to hesitate, What the f*ck so her life is not all important but her so-called feeling that you imagined is important, ho yes she will thank you to let her die for her "purity". Then (yes it's not finished), she was healed (I won't explain, I spoil but not too much), she said to herself that she will be carefull in the future and bim 10 minute later, ML was sick so she doesn't sleep for four consecutive days and she used her spiritual energy to the max. Wow you really take good care of yourself !
[collapse]SpoilerAlso one point difficult for me to accept is her traitment of herself (mc), I undersant that she is an orphan and it's really good to have someone dependent of her and she's got herself dependent of him But why are you only giving the good things to ML but nothing to you !! He was a stranger only a few days ago, he is sick but he won't die and you know that, it's really illogical to give everything to a stranger even if he is beautifull and let yourself suffer and even fall ill for him.
[collapse]I recommend to people who like a mary sue-like MC and angst. The story is really well-written.