I Married a Disabled Tyrant After Transmigrating Chapter 133 Discussion

5 out of 5

Very good

Translations/Writing - The translation is perfect 10/10. No mistakes. Writing-wise, it is perfect (for me). No long winded paragraphs. Perfect length details for character scenes. I think it could use more details for the worldbuilding

Characters:

ML - He is a dragon (in human form) put into a "semi-coma" that lets him only stay awake for a half hour each day. Due to his past, he is insecure and falls hard for MC because of how dedicated she is when she takes care of him. There's way more to his character, but in general, most of it revolves around his insecurities. His introspective scenes were fun to read.

MC - "Lowly, weak, poor, disrespected wife of a dragon on his deathbed". She's hardworking and just trying to get by in life. Just a heads up, the start of the story has nothing of crazy in it. There's no romance or any enemies or any big schemes happening immediately at all. It is solely focused on the MC just doing her job and trying to fix the terrible start she has been put into. Nitpick#1

I don't understand the money system in this story very well. The prices of stuff just seem random at times, just to fit the story. "With one small magic stone, you can buy 30 magic seeds or ten pounds of ribs" (over-exaggeration, of course)

Nitpick #2 (Spoiler of around ch110)

Spoiler

They are hinting that the ML's sister (Original Protagonist A.K.A "The Mean Girl") does actually have a "Protagonist Aura". Even though she's a s*ave, she somehow seduced a high ranking official in the dragon clan.

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