- #1
The flow of the novel is quite good. The female lead is a sensible character but the author did the male lead dirty by making him no better than a fussy kid. He is written as an immature and shallow person, the only goal in his life seems to be using his immense wealth and position to make advances towards the female lead. He seems to have no job or aspirations in life other than her and, by extension, their supposed child (He is a character with no character). The other two second male leads are a bit better. They are still high-achieving and handsome, but are like dogs fighting for the FL's attention. But at least they show some respectable restraint. FL has no female friends and always seems to be in control of every situation with minimal effort. There is no struggle nor character development. With a bit of effort from the author, this novel could have been much much better. It has a good premise and setting, but it is all for nought as the author seems to self insert her fantasy as a do-no-fault female character here. Overall, this seems to be a fantasy of the author who wants three handsome men swooning and fighting for her attention.