Tasty, Not Sweet Chapter Completed Discussion

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Spoiler free: The story was okay. Honestly, I got a little tired as soon as they got together. There was a bit of drama, but it didn't play out long enough. It was just a cute story about an omega and alpha couple who had a baby, alpha lost memory, omega was alone taking care of baby, then years later the alpha comes back and wins the omega back and cares for the baby. Of course, there's more to it, but that's basically the whole story. There were a major plot hole which bothered me the entire story which kinda ruined the whole thing for me once I finished it because I was hoping at least they would explain or fix the plot hole, but there was nothing at the end.

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The plot hole was that the alpha basically had amnesia and her memories never came back. The thing that bothered me the most was that even though we found out that the alpha was the missing wife and the other mom of the daughter, the omega accepted her right away. There was no 'but you're a different person now' type of thing. The omega just was like 'its u!! but im going to have a little hard time loving u... but I love you!'. She was just 100% ok with it. I guess I kinda wanted something more like 'I woke up to find I have a child' with the amnesia. But, that just bothered me. And for the plot hole, I guess I wanted her to have her memories back or somewhat have her memories back. She fell in love with the omega love at first sight and after finding out she's actually the mom and past lover of the omega, she also was just 100% down.

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all in all, I guess if you just want something sweet, suggestive, and short. this is for u.

oh but translation is great. some pronouns be messed up but overall, its good.
 
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