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So far this is an amazing work, the background and lore, overall storyline and plot, is well done and intriguing. The main character's actions and motivations make sense, 2 or 3 things are a bit railroaded, but aside from that everything has a clear reason behind it. Most importantly, the other characters aren't one dimensional; the common folly with harems is that the characters just follow a template, and you don't really get attached to them. In this story, the other characters have clear backstories and multi-faceted personalities, which really helps the story. Another common issue with harems is that it usually makes no sense as to why the other characters like/are obsessed with the MC, where common kindness or cruelty is somehow extremely charming. In this story, the appeal and charm of the MC makes sense, and it's understandable why they shine so brightly.If you're worried about in*est, to the point I've reached, there's basically no chance of it. Unlike everyone else, the daughter has pure feelings of the MC being a motherly figure, and the MC is a devoted parent. Even the harem that sees most people close to the MC as a rival, the daughter is ignored, due to the sheer aura of a parent-daughter relationship that oozes from their interactions.There are a few issues in my opinion, although they don't detract from the overall quality of the story. In typical gender-bender fashion, there are long drawn out descriptions of the beauty and features of the MC, repeatedly throughout the story. However, it still mainly focuses on the story and my main gripes with the gender bender genre's tropes aren't present. There's also a hint of Japan (Island country) hate, but it's not often brought up, and it's not extreme racism like in a lot of other Chinese/Korean works, it's more of a dunk on the country than the people.You can really feel the passion that the characters have for idols and the knowledge that the author has on dances and idol activities. The main events of the story are interesting, well-written, tell you more about the characters, and build on the plot. Nothing that happens in the main plot is really useless, it's often set-up or to deepen feelings, which is a hard feature to find with webnovels. Highly recommend.Real, true, without a doubt, will happen, theory:Spoiler
Kirimi Miyuki is without a doubt Charlotte, I need this
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