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Chapter: 28
Already a couple chapters in, and the world system doesn't work and contradicts itself...
Going by the logic those guys follow, half of the academy should have been dead. Not to mention just how tr*shy the headmaster is... but that's another point.
It's hard to find some common sense in that novel... people don't bully commoners because of the headmaster, yes, but that doesn't mean nobles are the next target.
Like, those guys are starting wars every single moment!
Normally you would think twice before offending a family with power almost equal to yours, especially so because the consequences would be huge... not on this novel.
Also, on this novel, whoever resists an attack, even by the law of the jungle, it means he offended that person, so he has to die.
If you beat a person without even hurting them, but maybe making them look slightly uncool, it's a f*ckin personal grudge, no way around it.
If you prove your strength, it still means shit, because no one cares about face, while at the same time it's the most vanruable and most valuable thing on themselves. So no one worries about attacking you, and it's screw them all time!
Whatever path you take, it's hatred through eternity... makes you wonder how they would respond in a situation they are no longer the strongest... right?
Nah, it's the same shit, and afterwards the offended guy's family gets exterminated because he kicked a steel plate, while having porcelain face.
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Is it time to talk about the beyond ret*rded headmaster?
Darn... hoped this time would never come. Oh well, it doesn't need saying how he ruined his own academy.
He singled out a party (the nobles), let's them do whatever they want without acting, meaning passively helping them and forgoing his duties.
This whole thing is quite detrimental to the academy, but it goes without saying it's all natural.
Oh, and when he does remember to do something for his academy, turns out he doesn't have enough power, HE who in the 28 chapters I am reading is described as an all powerful entity... (this whole thing happens later on btw)
People behave like it's okay to break the rules if you are going by a loophole, and some people are so easily tricked, that if you wanted to abduct them, you wouldn't even need to lift your finger... they would just jump right on the van for you to take them away.
It's hard to recommend this story to someone, especially because it's a living trope, but I remember it had its good moments further on, so I will update this review later too and update my thoughts.
Chapter: 60
First edit: the novel did improve on justifying it's bullshit, so rating improved from 2.0 to 2.5... grats?
Chapter 98:
Second edit and I have to say I'm impressed by this line of bullshittery:
"Uncle Yun, why aren't you spoiling Luan Er?" Literally the author can't manage a normal humane personality for f*ck's sake... If that's how people raise their kids on that planet, the whole world should have been dead and destroyed by internal and external strife... literally the only reason I edited it this time was to add this line of bullshit.
Edit three:
Chapter 186:
Just when I decide to up my rating to 3 stars, some bullsh*t happens, and I leave it as it was...
This time it's with battle skills.
Why the f*ck! Does everyone think that something as precious as a battle skill would be carried on one's person.
Heck! I'm leaving out the fact all those "masters" and ret*rds don't even consider a huge power might be backing him, because I'm already unimpressed by their intelligence.
I know that they don't even consider a possible genocide of their clan from the possible pissed huge power behind the MC in the event he is killed.
Of course, the MC as stated from the very first chapters, doesn't have such a power, but it is only s*upid to assume such a thing.
SpoilerWhere else would such a great genius that at less than 20 years old is capable of fighting huge experts of entire 2nd class cities, COMBINED come from? They don't even bother thinking about that.
[collapse]It's hard to believe they can breath unassisted with such intelligence...
But the f*ck is going on with the intelligence of the author?!?
I mean, at some point, it stops being the characters... this is at that point.
Edit fourth:
Chapter 187:
FFS!
Even the author acknowledges what I'm saying in the next freaking chapter!
Does the author think intelligence is only limited to old and powerful humans?
Literally, that must be what the author thinks... no other explanation.
Aside from the MC whom is really ret*rded some times, but since it's overshadowed by others I don't talk about it much, everyone else (weaker than some absolute god sh*t tier) is beyond brain dead.
Edit fifth:
Chapter 193:
The novel acknowledges that even if MC doesn't have a battle skill, he can write it out for them...
Only thing, those people from edit 3 hadn't taken into account the fact that the MC might not freaking have an entire battle skill on him when they were trying to kill him.
This just adds a small bit of logic, but does nothing else to fix the already destroyed novel... it needs a rewrite, and nothing can change that.
I like how the author changed his ways for a bit and included logic.
That's it from my fifth edit!
Edit sixth:
Chapter 257:
Logic has really improved, but somehow it's still a chore to read for me... maybe it's because it's my second time reading it...
Oh well, it should be glad for the promotion to 3 stars...
But wait a second! What made me think it's a chore to read? Is it really that I'm rereading it, or that there is a f*cking new enemy every 10 or so freaking chapters!
I've reread novels many times, and I can confirm this is a chore to read...
Guess it's gonna stay at 2.5 stars till it learns how to improve.
Edit seventh:
chapter 274:
This chapter is so good I'm improving my rating to 3/5 just for it.
Like aside from the usually ret*rded MC and the rest of the world, we don't see any logic... well, this chapter is an exception to that.
A pleasant surprise.
Edit eighth:
Chapter 455:
There were many times I wanted to comment about the s*upidity going all around this novel before this, but I would be just repeating myself.
You would think that after some time the author would improve, but no... if it doesn't stay shit, it will get worse. The option of improvement is nonexistent.
And here, once again for the millionth time, the author was high while writing.
Being high and writing is a bad combo, but he does it all the time nonetheless.
You must be imagining that normally, positions of power would be taken by those mentally stable, right?
Especially the ones that have to deal with negotiations, envoys and stuff like that. But that's not the case here!
Based on the intelligence of a three year old child once more, the plot progresses with yet another group finding a reason to fight the MC.
I'm not saying anything describing the events to avoid spoilers, but when you can't even freaking investigate a little before making a HUGE decision with lots of implications then you're mentally challenged.
The MC let's say proves his power and helps an entire city. It's something that would be hard to do for anyone, but let's say he does it.
The others don't know its the MC, and just assume he has no connection to the city, despite sacrificing so much for it.
You now start to see where logic fails us, right?
It's not exactly what happened, but that's how the plot progressed.
I can't help but take back my 1 added star and leave it back to 2 stars...
Because I can't take it when the author is f*cking playing with me, or is literally brain-dead!
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