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Look hey I think this novel was not bad now not bad means nether good nor bad but it tips more or less towards bad anyways, The novel starts off not bad I mean with potential like ok pacing ok characters and ok MC cliche but hey I mean your not expecting much but that's when it starts going down hill I mean look this is a review but I feel like this is gonna seem like a rant anyways this novel is of course with repeats and chapters that are fillers that are mixed with somewhat important information.The world building might seem okay but it just repeats constantly and God the arrogant young master he meets might as well be in every sect, city, restaurant. And it doesn't stop there the dead weight and buff//loot stealing side characters he carries around seem endless Spoiler
his love interest r all introduced, developed and part in plot r all so badly done its like hoping oil and water mix. Calling this a turning point seems right because the author buffs the useless love interest who only cares about the child and the other wives r basically forgotten because they r rarely if not never mentioned in the plot again so the only feel good moments r with the useless child wife
[collapse]I hope this doesn't drive yall away from this but I'm not lying when I say this probably has all if not most cliche plot writing every author uses. Also there are way too many plotholes in this. MC is ret*rded or maybe he's just lacking in the commen sense department Also some the side character actually most side characters get more screen time than the FMC.Some good points on this is that the MC uses the sword