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The first girl he met was Romantic. Pretty girl who loves books meets him in the Library like a Fateful meeting. Both become pretty interesting but suddenly she is discarded in the story leaving no more room for character development. Suddenly the next girl and then the girl after that... the female heroines just become so Plain and hardly have a personality anymore. The good Impression they gave before is short because after a few chapters they are discarded.
[collapse]The Novel keeps changing Arcs every 10-20chapters. Its because of this that the Characters don't really feel real. It leaves no room for Character Development or to grow attach as a Reader. Its very short.Character Development: NoneRomance: Yes but too plainComedy: Well hardlyBromance: Pretty GoodCreative Ideas: Yeah but not used to its full potentialAction: Really goodIt's fast and very short chapters. It's a decent read. It could had been a better story though. After 200-300 chapters is when this Novel will truly begin... sadlyBtwn. You will be reminded a lot about Kirito. The fighting style the sameSpoilerI love the foreshadowing it gives. Since the beginning the MC had used his old power and knowledge from his previous life to adapt in this new world that has different powers. When he lost all his power that he got from this world. He only has his old abilities to rely on. Which have always been OP since the beginning. That's why he is called Chaotic Sword God. The Author ideas aren't bad but he's written this story way to fast. The way he shows the MC growth then kills off the MC abilities inorder to bring up his full potential at that very moment. Alas its sad that the whole story a mess
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