- #1
Decent story, decent writing, decently dimensional characters, decent character growth, decent pacing. Just decent, not wow.Unlike someone who faults weird stuff, I don't find any awkward writing style nor the need to compare it with another genre and borrowing their vocabularies such as cultivation and qi. If you don't do those things, your judgement will no longer be clouded by the other genre's cliches, because duh, obviously this genre also have its own cliches that is not necessarily the same cliche as your beloved wuxia.Dense protagonist is as dense as the way she is after 20 or so chapters in, and impostor complex, all has been depicted reasonably. If you see yourself as ugly, others tell you ugly, even your one and only trusted person calls you ugly, then that's the "accepted truth" means psychologically MC is accepting the factn't that she's ugly. As the soul inside was formerly man and the body was formerly fat, she doesn't realize that after diet and exercise she's no longer fat but she (as former male) has no idea that the lump of fat remaining is called *oppai* and it makes sense if you don't have an idea what it is, you just assume whatever. You don't know what you don't know. Especially if that damn mentor never gives her any reflective surface so she never sees her own appearance lmao.If you lose braincells after reading this, then idk maybe this one's simply not your thing. For me it's decent enough, not super wow, not something to train my train of thoughts. Hints are easy to spot too so idk. TL is also doing good job.