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Despite also getting annoyed at the same points as some of these other reviews what drops me to 2*s is primarily how disjointed the story telling is. It'll jump into a future scene without any warning, go multiple chapters in that new scene, and then finally (if you're lucky) go back and explain what the heck happened to get from that scene multiple chapters ago to now. It's incredibly jaring story telling.On top of that a lot of the characters are from the author's prior work, which apparently did quite well (I didn't like that one either tbh) and since they just assume you read that one a lot of the character development and other context is left in ambiguity to lead you to read that one too. Also is the reason the level of combatants in this novel swing wildly wide. MC is WEAK, even if incredibly talented, rich, and very well trained she hasn't had multiple hundreds of year or the power of videogame grinding to make her OP.World building is alright, even if it's not really capitalized on. The information about politics and geography, city information and fads are mentioned but completely worthless as they're never used in contextAll in all... It's 2* due to personal preference ultimately. (Should be 3* but I can't edit it now after my misclick) I wouldn't recommend it to one with a thought process like mine but it isn't a terrible story