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This is amazing. I love the plot and I am continuously at the edge of my seat on what's going to happen next. Even more so when the brainwashing spells really are that complicated to where it's understandable why MC is convinced that the ML may be still under them.I honestly don't have words to describe the rest of plot without major spoilers. But this story does has a hint of thriller and horror without being it. The romance is like approaching a cliff on a speeding sports car that never seems to reach the edge. This story leaves you a little breathless with anticipation despite the fact that the initial scene in the beginning is still a little ways off.I love this story the moment I read the initial scene. The build up to it is making me impatient but I have to read every word or else I might miss something important. But it's that right there that may be this story's downfall but I'm not too worry about it though.Spoiler
It's downfall is that there may be too much detail going into the process of breaking the brainwashing spells that the ML is under. Reading how the MC goes about it isn't a hardship but it does become a little tedious after a while making it a little boring in someparts. But I'm not worried because the author uses a very well timed timeskip and summarized the process and I can feel another one coming very soon
[collapse].The pacing of the story is smooth because of this. I honestly wished I found this story a few months later than now because I feel like I'm a few chapters away from a critical plot point! I feel so frustrated right now!!Update: I was right critical plot point passed. HUZZAH!