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The author used the prolog as a crutch to kick start the story and hook you in abit, which I feel is kind of cheating. Theres basically no build up or explaination for the mc's transmigration or why he was so good or obssessed with the game. He was apparently a whale that got tired of being ripped off and just dumped the game cold turkey, then years past. It's a bit of an abrupt start but if the real story gets explained later through the heroes' pov it could be really interesting. There's potential for an entertaining story depending on how the connection to the game and real life plays out. Was it a god game where it was real all along? Did the game just suddenly become real? Is it an alternate dimension thats extremely similar to the game and the MC just body snatched someone? Did he fall into the game for some reason? Hopefully the author has a good explaination to tie this all together.