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According to first 25 chapters -It seems like a good story that will make you smile... has action, fluff, kingdom building element to it... although this novel suffers from problem a lot of novel suffer... the author doesn't know how to make a authentic story... everything happens just because the author demands it to happenSpoiler
MC was super powerful and rich in his last life but no competent servant or nanny were hired to take care of his niece.
Everything MC needed to make his Kingdom better is just lying around MC... there is no suspense or sense of tension.
The MC went to travel to capital with his niece with no guard (like you are a duke bro)... he even has to leave his niece in this arc to take care of monster or other tasks... the author just didnt bother writing about new characters for this arc.
[collapse]The story seemed like it could have a lot of potential but it is pretty obvious the author just intends to leave it as a light and fluffy read... if that's what you want to read go for it