Most Eligible Widow-Bachelor in the Six Realms Chapter 28 Discussion

It's an OK, although I am not sure if it's because of the bad translation that's pretty much MTL or if it's the author's writing itself but things felt abrupt. Things basically happen in unreasonable ways as it is made to happen to lead to an obvious and predictable outcome. Characters are all plot driven and doesn't exactly have their own individuality, but this is just my perspective.

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The main problem I actually don't like about this story is the forcibly made tragic side couples, which seems to follow the same formula of regret where they would "accidentally" kill the person that they love and regret it, consisting of the bottom falling in love first following with the seme falling harder yet still for some reason continue to try and stick to his beliefs or set mission of killing the uke despite them already knowing that they have feelings for them??? Anyway, it just didn't feel reasonable even though they changed their mind to only wanting to seal or suppress the ukes, yet by coincidence the ended up killing the person that they love completely. I love wife chasing crematorium but when I am being shown with the same kind of couples in the same story, I am bound to get sick of it especially with this very forced format.

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Aside from that, the main couple is actually quite cute. The story has some pretty good ideas itself, it's just that some aspects turned me off. I've also only got passed two sides couple that felt like the copy and paste of each other so the other side couples might have something else to offer as well as the main couple, however, the bad impression of the two side couples I read had ran deep so I am dropping this story which is quite a shame as I actually liked the first story of the side couple until I was offered with pretty much the same type of story again.