Evade The Hero and Flee! Chapter 20 Discussion

I really wanted to like this, but it's boring.

• POVs are all over the place, going forward and back on the time line, making it confusing and unfocused.
• MC has 40 year time skip from being a farmer to a 'drill sergeant' for an evil corporation in a few paragraphs.
• Things that would be a nice plot twist are instead explained in a dumb POV internal monologue.
• Several POVs of the same scene, including from side and unimportant characters.
• For more than 20 chapters he's training a new class and nothing really happens.

So much wrong in so few chapters. Could be forgiven if the story was nice, but it's not.