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POV Switches. They are everywhere in this fic like a damn plague. Honestly, the writing is so disjointed that it skips forward into the future then to the past, before it recounts previous scenes, but from another perspective.There are only three main arcs I've read. A) Evil Organization Arc, B) School Arc and C) Tournament Arc.All of these story lines hardly feature the MC. We barely get 10% of the word count from his perspective. Generally I tend to avoid multi POV story, and this is a great example as to why.I don't recommend others to read this mess of a story. It isn't entertaining, the MC is rather an idiot and his disciples are all masochists/yanderes.Summary - MC is op instructor. He is dense as f*** with 'brilliant' plans. Yandere students chase him, he repeats old mistakes and nothing really develops in this fic concerning him. He has yet to grow as a character at all and we are forced to read the continuation of his flaws creating adverse effects on his life. Affecting his survivability.Also, there's some s*upid loli (Silver Devil) metal-staff weapon who talks like an idiot. It's annoying cause all she does his beat people up in an attempt for humor. Which actually isn't funny at all. In fact its cringe af, where the MC look wants to be seen as a wannabee badass alpha, but instead he comes off as a weird beta creep with sadism tendenciesOverall, I would be more disappointed than anything else, but I'm a bit too salty over this troll novel.Rate 1.8/5