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I give it 3 stars. The story isn't bad, and the translator does his best but the author has no idea of past/present tense, using idioms that make no sense, and just throwing things in the story that I have no idea why they would be there at all. But maybe that's just the way Japanese is. It's hard to read, but if you look over all the grammatical errors it is a fun little story. I'll continue to read it and see how the author matures in his writing.