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I honestly didn't expect much from this novel and only ever read it for Duke-- but what kind of father slash King would name their child after a position/rank? Henceforth he's known as Prince Duke or King Duke or if ever he gets a lower rank he'll be known as Duke Duke- LMAO--Honestly speaking this is terribly written and I very much agree to the review before me. Let's see--
- There's the lack of respect or formality towards Prince Duke himself. No greetings whatsoever if you happen to walk by him or talk to him.
- The characters are just horribly written. We have an idealistic og MC which I won't even get started with. The mc's brothers are also illogically written, I read this a few weeks ago yet I don't remember a thing I've read, it's just that dull and s*upid.
- You could literally drown in Mc's thoughts. There are chapters that literally just show her thoughts and how she accomplished doing magic sh1t bit sitting there and thinking. I skipped a lot of chapters like that.
- There's absolutely no logic in this story. What the hell was the father thinking about giving her Spoiler
two years of quarantine
[collapse] that was absolutely irrelevant, has done nothing to help the plot and literally just added more plot holes to piles of plot holes the story already has. - Honestly feels like it's written by a 13 year old.
- We get it, she's always- if noy always, then ALWAYS ALWAYS the center of attention, but do you have to mention that this dude and that dude glared at her? The amount of times I've read the word "glare" to mention someone's discontent or contempt for her is concerning.