Unsheathed Chapter 20 Discussion

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Sorry. Not my cap of tea. Everything went well, I liked the pace, world building, characters interaction. But I tend to notice small things that burn my bu*t really hard. And when the MC, young peasant kid (without training), managed to ambush and kill 2 grown ass cultivators. That became a no-go flag for me. Also, from the author's side it explains like "Well, he did a lot of manual labor, had good stamina and all that sh*t you know". WTF? Well, the slavеry wasn't a thing if it was enough.

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I was thinking of giving it two more chances, but only if I get bored. Givin it 1 strike so far

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