- #1
it's good, not too good and it doesn't seem too smooth tbh. everything is happening in a rush and before we can even see more of the relationship growth, they have a kid and then it's a 3-year time skip. I think had this novel had more sweet moments or even more descriptive kisses or made this more mature it could have received more attention. but for the way it is... the idea is excellent-i LOVE it... but the execution is truly poor... it needs more details between the couple, more details about their marriage, more details about their backstory not to mention If they didn't want to give details about romance then at least about how they interact with the child-but nope and if not that they could have concentrated more on how she builds up her own empire and surpasses the ML or even can stand against him.it had a good concept and I mean it's short so I wouldn't say it's a waste of time and I don't regret reading it...I just feel things were too rushed and there was some unexpected drama-a bit over the top tbh...