- #1
The story flow move too fast.It's not that a flash marriage/pregnancy is a bad thing tho it's quite romantic in its way (the real thing is there are people out there who really get a flash marriage due to many circumstances and it's not always a bad thing) But the problem here is the pace. The story flow. Which is too fast like there is a missing story in between. The feeling is not fully equipped. Like a missing lyrics. You know something is not right, and you wish to make it right somehow but you cant. And it is stuck in your chest because you can't let it go.You will u understand once you read it.