- #1
I quite liked it at first but as the story goes on two glaring prpblems appear:
- The villains are too cunning behind the shadows, too s*upid in the light. Whenever they scheme against the MC/the good guys, they seem to have infinite resources and intelligence. When they fight the MC, they're suddenly all "INSOLENCE! YOU SHALL DIE!"
- The protagonists are a bit mary sue. They never lose, at most tieing/escaping, they have genius levels of planning, and the FC especially is just straight up psychic. She always knows what's going on, and always has all the information the MC needs.