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A novel with good basic plot in the beginning, but the second phase kinda left me with some dissatisfaction.The first plot is well structured, not overdone, but still flowing smoothly.But in the second plot, it's starting to crumble. The same type dialogs were being repeated, same type of inner monologs, and the pacing was messy. 10 chapters (or more) filled with background story for a side character that didn't pose any significant role in the main plot line is too much.This is the same problem that happened with many japanese web novels though, so I couldn't blame the author. Feels like midway, the got the same editors or publishers, and got the same demands to stretch the story as long as possible, so most story, in the 2nd or 3rd phase starts to feel repetitive and filled with filler chapters.This is purely my opinion, but overall, the story is enjoyable enough. I think I won't continue this one just because the pacing is not my cup of tea.
