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This book is quite enjoyable. From the characters to the story, all around a complete story. No grammar issues. There were a few times that I had issues understanding the story because of a sudden and unexpected pov shift, but nothing all that bad. If there is one thing (yes I have to give a bit of critique) that annoys me, it is the morals of the MC. He is like 'No killing - anyone'. Okay. When he comes across arsonists and robbers he brainwashes them (idk why he thinks its any better than killing them outright), when he comes across mass mu*derers, s*avers, and more gruesome guys he STILL keeps it up. But when he comes across Spoiler
vampires
[collapse] hes like 'nah an whole entire new species so idc anymore just kill them'. Look if you're gonna use those kinds of morals you may as well kill them all and be done with it. Well anyways that was my TED talk, really enjoyed the story, recommend reading it.