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It's just not good. That's it. The plot is average, the characters are pretty average too. The bad things are, the way story progresses, the pacing, sometimes the story and the writing is pretty tr*sh.The plot is pretty much what you can read here in the description, nothing more. The characters are as generic as you can think them too be. And our MC also suffers from good guy syndrome where in the face of absolute malice he will keep playing your good guy character, which just feels inhumane, off and very lazy writing at best. Feels like the author couldn't bother to give 5 minutes of thought into the character. Think of the most generic good guy character you can think of and that's exactly our MC.Another things that just ruins it is how little the whole isekai shtick didn't matter. Like, we find out he gets isekaied and yeah that's it, isekai doesn't play any part in the story, not even once, you could cut out the chapters where he gets isekaied and you will probably not understand 3 lines at most in the whole story, which is mind blowing because why would you even introduce something like isekai if the story doesn't use it? I don't know.The next thing also stems from isekai. Our main character says he provably had a wife but he can't remember cause he lost his memory, which is fine. But, what is not fine is how he carries himself around. He acts as if he was 25, which he might've been, which can be excused by saying he was 25, until you realize he forgot everything, so how does he know how to act like an adult? Common sense would tell you, someone who forgot his memories completely will not know who he was obviously, but our MC breaks common sense and logic. And it's just not our MC, every kid who is 10, acts like they are 20, and 20 year old's act like they are 10. A character, which might become a love interest down the line, is very "dependable" and "admirable", but then how will they become a love interest cause all of us know only weak and airhead and cutesy women can become love interest, so, our author mentions she is clumsy sometimes. How lazy can the author get is beyond me.Oh btw, the main love interest is 10 years old. Yeah. Gives me creeps when a 10 year old is trying to be romantic with a 6 year old while both of them are acting like 20 year olds.What I don't understand with these novels is, if you are this lazy, this disconnected form reality, then why write a novel in the first place? Clearly, the author doesn't give a f about the story and character, so then why?Anyways, this a complete waste of time and isn't enjoyable in the slightest, I can think of like 50 more s*upid things about this novel but whatever. Go read something else